
I REALLY REALLY LOVED THIS ONE its just why did he break the mirror like i don't understand why did he pull a tantrum after having sex was it not consenual? like that it was as if they were desperate just to make a conflict in the story buttt meehhhh I LOVED IT(▰˘◡˘▰)

T'was merely a misunderstanding. They were assuming all different kind of things. Sal was shy after the do. Shaal thought Sal was crying. Shaal apologized. Sal thought Shaal apologized because Shaal was regretting what he did. Sal felt hurt and said stuff. Ran through the mirror. Blanket got caught on the corner of magical mirror. Then baam. Mirror broke.

don't get me wrong i love the whole story n shit I think this is my top 4 of my top 10 list but I just thought that it had too many conflicts it was so unnecessary it was soo dramatic for no reason at all when you compare this to other bls, they have more interesting main conflicts that both parties try their best to resolve. idk it was just shallow, overall this was a good read probably the only bl that gave me the ultimate butterflies in my stomach but yeah the main conflict could have been better it's cliche ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
I think the whole characterization of iruma being greedy is being well built up, we see that most of his quirks esp his eating habits displays gluttony and now finally his greed to help/be friends with everyone. Overall I love how the story does not forget the overarching archetypes of each character and is only built on as the story progresses while also adding very well written character plots for everyone. In short I love this story so much>~<