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the relationship development is amazing but what shocks me even more was seos BACKBONE my gosh i have NEVER in my life seen such refusal from an uke during a semes redemption arc and his adamant refusal pissed me off so much which makes me so HAPPY BECAUSE HE WASNT A PUSHOVER. but- i have a few comments about the story
seo was portrayed as this family guy who cares all about his family but after a few chapters we BARELY see his family, i barely even realized his grandma was in the hospital, and he has like… no older brother instinct??? you’d think he’d coddle his younger brother and wish to protect him and shit but like??? none of that happens? brother basically disappears from the story which is so uncharacteristic for seo whos portrayed as someone who’d do ANYTHING for his family.
don’t even get my started on the smut. this book felt like pure smut with a side of story. wtf. i can count the amount of genuine conversations they’ve had on one hand. they screw more than they freakin talk to each other.
also, why the hell do we know little to NOTHING about kwon after almost A HUNDRED chapters??? like hello???? like we literally only know how family drama but we never got to learn anything about HIM which is so disappointing. dude literally SMIILED for the FIRST time in the LAST chapter
also what ended up happening to the blonde dude like hello??
overall their relationship is cute but the story is lacking severely which thus makes the read anxiety inducing and questionable all throughout. (also their chemistry is lowkey lacking which is probably due to them fucking every three seconds and not having any genuine moments together. and when they DO have genuine moments… we BARELY see it??) author decides to give us all the smut but make all of their genuine hang outs and dates happen in a monologue so we don’t get to actually see any of it and feel their chemistry…. sigh what a shame. this had such great potential but feels like the author cares more about smut than the actual story.