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no cuz wtf this felt like a coming of age story yet we never see him coming out to his friends EVEN HIS BEST FRIEND???! BYE?!! that felt like such a focal part of his life story and like??? what author completely skipped it???
also i like angst don’t get me wrong… but idiotic pointless angst pisses me OFF. why didn’t he just confide in his best friend??? why didn’t she confront him? why couldn’t he just have a basic conversation with his boyfriend?? the angst was too drawn out and unnecessary tbh especially with that ex of his… totally pointless.
also we didn’t even get a single chapter of SEHUNS BOYFRIEND??! despite sehun being a literal main character is this story so what the literal fuc. also where did all of MCs friends go??? hello???? overall great drawing and plot but the storyline was ass and definitely didn’t need to be 80+ chapters. this could’ve been dumbed down into 50 really good chapters