j4y want to read (All 21)
beta
i agree with other commenters that this was hard to read and confusing, but it was still one of the most interesting villainess stories ive read. I liked that everything tied together at the end, but the miscommunication was so self inflicted i wanted to scream
this story isnt bad... its just super confusing. they keep introducing new characters and elements and conflict points and then dont resolve them in a conclusive way. also, leon and rio getting together at what 10 yrs old? weird. dont like it. hes a god and thinks of himself as an adult... im dropping it. it has too many plot holes.