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I had a really hard time figuring out why this feels wrong or off.....But I guess it wasn't convincing at all... I know, I'm being awfully rude, but it all felt like someone gave some dolls lines to say that kind of fit the genre... I felt like reading a script with only the spoken lines and none of the thoughts or atmosphere or body language... The art was great but the story felt non existing and the cheesy/cringe lines was delivered but not even convincingly.... It wasn't bad exactly, it just felt really off....