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The characters, the plot. It's one thing in the first panel and then a completely different one after. It lacks cohesiveness. The story is trying to tackle too many things at once. This would've been better if they focused on one plot point at first like teaching the kids about runes. But then we also have this kid kidnapping org running rampant and then the south korean hero being highly suspicious of the mc. They're doing this in the middle of a chapter. They could've just done it on the next one.
Would recommend reading it if you've got nothing better to do. 4.7/10.