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the concept intrigued me from the start, but we barely explored the characters and their dynamics. for example, why tease yeonil's backstory from the start just to have a flashback from hs telling us his relationship w/ mingyu instead of SHOWING us? he's such a complex character just for us to be left hanging at the end, readers still don't know the full story of why he suddenly started treating yeonil like a stranger, there's obv much more to it than "I'm leaving him alone bc he told me to fuck off" like r u srs rn