Alright, the rape part and "you allowed it" was not okay, I really hope BLs will move away from this sort of thing.
Still, this was so good, the beginning was sweet, but the ending, urgh... it HIT LIKE A TRUCK. Makes you really think about how game-changing a good ending is, most BLs start interesting and lose fire at the end
And can anybody talk about the COMPOSITION! You know when the art is so good you feel like you could walk inside it?
Kiran if he don't want you, come to me