beta
I’m a sucker for animal characteristics but man this story was such a pain to read sometimes. First off, there’s so many holes in the plot, like what happened to the man in the casino? What’s going to happen now? There’s so many problems they haven’t resolve.. plus, I felt like Some chapters weren’t even added here because of how confused I was. I also feel like the end of the story was so rushed like they didn’t even get back to their house… why are we ending it off there?