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"I fell in love with a person that used me" is such a stupid motivation whether it be in this story or in "I Became the Wife of the Monstrous Crow Prince". Both those girls were warned by others, felt at some point that things were not ok, and still decided to ignore it and ruin themselves and their loved ones. It's such a turn off. I would much rather the main motivation be to get revenge on the bloodline that exterminated all her kin as it had been hinted before. Not the "Im gonna throw a tantrum and destroy this country because I fell in love with an asshole". Now I can't even take her seriously. All she is is just an angsty little girl instead of the smart calculating villain she was at the beginning.