beta
read from 1 to 24... not loving it
jumped to 40 same thing, no revenge yet still a lot of noncon
read from 60 to side 2 or 3... still noncon, seems a little bit of trying-trying-to-save-myself plot, hope he doesn't carry their babies, I like Leon
it doesn't need to cook anymore, he needs to get his powers back, save his self, or Leon need to save him with a HEA at the end but it needs to be done now....
And have some fuck plot progress please