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Maybe the theme was "if my feisty cat could turn into a human and speak", and this author may baby-fy cats cuz they're actually so cute, let's face it — hoomans do that. But written into a story here feels very clunky. The cat has an angwy kitty personality that only likes food and basically bites everyone whenever he pleases, but does an impoverished 21 year old who has always been chased by debt possibly his whole life act that way? It's something to think about. ╮(￣▽￣)╭