I can’t even get into this the Mac makes to many dumb decisions for an undercover agent (⊙…⊙ )
Omg I can’t anymore why does he look like a 15 year old child#-.-)
Ok criticism here they should not have brought his back story in so early second even if they brought back his backstory I feel like it would have been more impactful if it was ML that told Dan his backstory than old man because now it will feel like a relationship built on pity, also this arc should have been about dan becoming better and happier and Jake falling in love with dan(so it should have been a one sided love with Jake being the one to do the chasing. Because now it just feels like Dan will fall for Jake because of pity
Is it me are is the translation fine and lowkey not that bad maybe I built up a resistance to bad translation ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
I really like this story but I need more maybe some side stories
I regret reading this ……it to good with to little chapters and I keep saying I will let them build up but I end up still reading the chapter when it comes out
I think a lot of ya all or be a little to heartless towards the ml like his back story is pretty fucking horrible imo I think he really needs help