icecoffee1111 want to read (All 1142)
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1. main story was good. the mom might need to be explored more considering she depressed and gay. and his dad is not really mentioned
- the top is soooo pretty and i like that most of this couples are buff/fit same height guys, stead of the girly one and the tall one yk
- the tops trauma poor kid was like i got called weird and i broke up my loves family he will never love mmeee. dude needs therapy too
2. the friends being a couple is cute, wheres the wedding at
- i feel like this story would have been more fun if it wasnt almost the same as the main story. like even their problems were the sameish
3. the boss' story. i liked it, in the authors note the author says she just could not see the top having a complete redemption arc, as forgiveness is something he can live without and like i agree with her. i dont think he really cares what the bottom thinks as long as they are in the same house. I do think it would be nice to see him become more mentally stable person but still a sadistic dom WHY CANT WE HAVE BOTH!!!
4. A THERAPIST is what this story needs the boss needs one sooooooooooo bad like author you want to fix him a little make him and his bottom go to therapy, separately and together. The boss' bottom omg dude needs therapy badddd like buddy oooooooof. The mom in the main story needs one too. like omg ppl i know therapy is not common but its an easy solution (for novels) to rewrite someones personality and fix most of their mental problems (real life therapy does not magically do this but its still good btw)
5. but yea thats all i think the main problem with the last story is that is was such a contrast to the other two that its like this is not what i signed up for.
If the boss was going to therapy in the 3 years apart instead of stalking him they could have had a nice bdsm relationship with a safe word
IM SO FUCKIGN WORRIED that scared the life out of mee omg everthing is gooonnene 2 thousand + books wheere have they gone what in the world but its ok bc this has happened before but i need an apology for this jump scare Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
1. it was really confusing, like the names i could not remeber and then the money thing i just didnt get it, and i kept forgetting who was who
2. i like the couple. they match eachother well and they are cute, wish there were side chapters for some cute romance stuff.
3. the unanswered questions, what happened to the villain, is the brother okay, the secartary/sercet child what was up with him, the couple never actually confesses to eachother and it would have been nice,
4. but the art was nice, eventhough i didnot get the money stuff the plot was fun, and the romance was a good pace and stuff