love this story so cute but you can see the author change the plot in the last chapter lol ;p like when exploring japan he doesn't know what electricity is or tap water but then he is on a plane lol. i think the author was going to do another world type love but then when they did the mirror break scene realized how they going to meet if the mirrors broken so they just put them in the same world
it was fine. not very exciting but it was cute ig. the student thats gay his crush looks like the mc which was funny and so does the clinic umbrella guy in the last chapter like everyone in this story has a type and its short, black hair, big eyes, lol.
but yeah could have had a better climax and ending.
starting from chapter 205
1. little 10 year old jung is soooo cute
2. the fish plot line is sooo funny like lolllヾ(☆▽☆)
3. the plot of the story is sooo good like the mystery and new information is just sooo goood i cant find the words to describe how much i love the plot
4. OMMGMGMG spoiler sorry not sorry jund dawon making the dungeon in his fight with the king what OMGGGGG !!!!!!!!! what omg i cant this is peak writing
5. so who is alpha like if the world is coming to an end now shouldnt we see alpha?
1. love the fl cleared up a memory misunderstanding by folding immediately when the ml guessed it correctly lol
2. bro breaking pens left and right everyday son no pen safe hide the ink dude
3. kind of boring ending like lets just end the story
4. the hair thing that the tutor gave is soooo ugly like if its not a bomb im be mad bc who would gift such an ugly hair charm. the real reason she gave it to the duchess straight hideous. and like it looks like a brooch so why make it a hair piece when it could be a brooch. soo pls let it be a bomb
5. the red haired once noble now commoner is sooo hot like poverty did her right, lost weight but still has curves in alll the right placessss. her guard lover is hot tooo likee
6. the ugly hair pin givess her powers that stupid i hate it
7. so much of the dialogue in this story is soo hard to read. like it just does not sound natural at all. chp 64 the blonde empire? i think he is talking to himself and it just reads sooo bad. and the chapter where the black haired ml leaves for the journey he and the fl are talking on the bed and its just like ugghh what are yall saying like omg this conversation is soo childish
8. the witch is the best thing in this story omg look at herrrr the artist put all her talent into this character omg perfection i wish the witch was the main character like girl just wants to have fun why ppl think she the villain shes not seeking ppl out they find her
9. him gettting hurt then healed was so boring like dude was dying but it was done in a way that we knew he was gonna be saved so like it did not really bring out emotions
10. i want a gl with the winter witch the the mom now daughter sienna
11. it was fine. kind of boring but cute