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feels kinda rushed. there’s so much potential to explore the characters feelings. I wanted to see more of sion agonizing about starting to want to protect laila. I kept reading further then suddenly they became teens. and i get that sion doesn’t talk much but the writer could at least spare more lines of them blocking the thoughts of feeling comfy instead of fear/guilt. sion almost had the thought of “is she a regressor too?’” but the author did not further this potential.
the next chance that they missed is when sion returned as an adult. How better would it have been for all the beautiful the scenery for the MC to have a bit of a flashback seeing the adult sion again for the first time. If the author wants to, they could still have him reach out ot her and pull her back to reality. and continue to the existing scenes. I agree with the comments that they are downplaying Laila’s side. Sion also could use a bit of a flashback for an extra guilt
the plot it self is actually interesting. (i love it when they are both regressor it doesn’t feel like “raising your husband/wife” trope) season 1 was executed well. i like that they showed both characters POV as it laid a potential ground work for romance.
However, that was all there is to it. It personally became meh. I might still continue reading just to see how it goes. I understand if people continues to enjoy it and those who drops this. Storytelling wise, it’s undeniable that the author missed the opportunity to explore more of how the characters unlearn their trauma/guilt. The many recent chaptes glossed this over and just went straight to romance. I’m not into slowburns but I’m not into rushed either for which this story is heading