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Honestly I still don't get why they hate each other so much... maybe this so called curse involves both their family?
Anyway... I was expecting a haters to lovers... and I feel I'm slowly getting it... mostly on ml's part tbh... I still don't get his behavior towards his cheating criminal basically ex wife... it makes less sense by the chapter... she not only cheated but scammed and robbed him and he's being... lenient? And yet... he doesn't hate her... but behaves that way towards mc over much less? Its weird... but at least he is hot...
Mc on the other hand... sorry... she's just disgusting... there's not one thing I like about her... personality, looks, behavior... nothing is salvageable... honestly... the heterocromy, the haircut, the way she dresses... it screams preteen cringe oc... it's the female version of a character created during 8th grade syndrome... I look at her and I cringe... the 2nd hand embarrassment skyrockets...
And Ik I commented on it before... but she looks disgusting... her hair is always a mess... she lacks fashion sense... and no woman would stay that sweaty like that... even more so an adult woman that suffered her condition for so long... Tie your hair, use a travel sized dry shampoo... use daily pads to stop wetting yourself... anti-transpirants, deodorants, napkins, wet towels... loose clothing... a couple changes of clothes... there's so much she could do to look and feel better...instead of going around looking that much of a mess... seeing her sweaty all the time is such a turn-off...
And speaking of turn-off... that smut scene.. can we even call that smut? Can we call those white screen even sensor? That was even worse than the white sabers, rainbow D's and pixelated parts from yaoi... not to mention all the wetness... tears, droll, mucus, sweat, fluids, squirting... even some pee if I'm not wrong... that... felt so disgusting... just imagining the sensation and smell.. makes my skin crawl... it was not sexy at all... so much for their first time after 60+chapters of wait...
And frankly... this feels more like just... propaganda for the author R18 patreon... like they made the comic for the OCs they draw doing naughty things there and not the other way around... and with how disgusting Michaela looks... I'm very uninterested...
I'm trully sorry and sad to say this... cuz this could be a good comic... but... even some pornhwa are better than this...author should at least rework Michaela.. and Andrew's super thick and veiny... neck is weird at times too... this was really such disappointment... ╥﹏╥