
I didnt expect this story to be so sweet, but it really is! I love love love the expression on their faces during sex-- especially the unhinged delight on the top's face! For someone scary looking, he's actually a green flag ML-- straightforward and crazy in love, but never to the point of seriously hurting his lover!!! He's possessive but not to the point of locking up the MC and I hope it stays that way

they are perfect for each other!! i just wish we got to see more of them at the end. the conflicts never dragged and, for the most part, the couple really did their best to communicate w each other. there may have been miscommunication as plot device, but it didn't feel tiring to read.
the bdsm part of this story is also surprisingly good!! !!
grump ml grew on me once i realized he's a clumsy crybaby top. both mc and ml had issues they had to work on. but at the very least, i felt their sincerity towards each other, even if they made the wrong choices (which, yakno, is crucial to move the plot forward)... as far as MLs go, this one's in the middle,,, not too horrible to be a red flag, still a very flawed ml to be truly a green flag.
the ML falling short on being a green flag actually adds some real spice to this story.
i like the MC. he's miserable without being too miserable that it drags. he's pretty decisive actually. good for him. he deserves the doting love of the crybaby grumpy ml.
the real mvp of this story is MCs roommate tho!