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I really didn't sleep a wink just to read the novel in one sitting. I hated how pathetic these characters are written. The potential is there but decided to make em pathetic lmao which is actually like that irl I mean MC is the type to kiss asss and win favors no matter how much he hates it, he ends up doing it anyways=bootlicking! HAHAHAHA
Yohan= weird kid, interesting but so unrelatable like he doesn't even feel human, he seems like a generic obsessive top.
MC= a frustrating twink who thinks bad of everyone but acts like a total loser despite having it all. Money, Looks, Brains and social skill Goddamn twink can't use that big brain properly like bro if you want to have real power and social standing go to your lane! WITH THE SMART KIDS why do u want the delinquents influence/power when u could use ur 'teachers pet' and good grades to make a solid group of student council gang?
The world building kinda doesn't make sense, it's so limited just to make this couple happen. I expected too much, it's just another angty story with smuts to feed brainrot