My 2 (non-existing) cents:
Mmm overall, the plot wasn’t so bad. Communication was definitely tea. It was definitely fast paced, but there’s nothing wrong with it. It was pretty cute and it was semi-short, but I personally feel that it was lacking in character personality. I could tell that the author tried to get that angst, but me personally, I wasn’t feeling any.
I do like MC but I feel that his character and relationships tend to be lacking? I feel that him and ML’s relationship just happened so randomly, I wasn’t feeling any chemistry in their relationship at all, even at the end. I’m not saying that their relationship was forced, but what I’m saying is that it was definitely a little too fast- especially with MC catching feelings. I guess it seemed fast paced to me because of how fast MC moved on from the other guy (I forgot his name). I wasn’t trying to see it in a realistic pov, but I just felt that the time for him to heal was so short, and the behavior of him facing against his “unrequited love” wasn’t as angsty as I thought it would be. MC loved “other guy” for years without knowing he was being used and manipulated (until the end), and for him to just do a 180 right away without any lingering feelings? As I said, I wasn’t trying to see things in a realistic way, but for some reason this was the only part that stuck to me. What I do like about him is that he’s strong willed. I liked how he didn’t really let his past life stop him from achieving what he wanted, and that he stood up for himself. His communication was also very good and I loved the way how expressed himself. His overall character was cute and honest.
ML was also green flag. I felt that he definitely was a side character until we got deeper into the story. I was confused abt his behavior until I remembered he was supposed to be the “sadistic” top. Overall his character was good but nothing really stood about him. Me personally, he was so-so.
The smut scenes:
Now I wasn’t expecting it to be like Flashlight, but I did wanted to see more of ML sadistic role. I wasn’t expecting any toys or ropes but I hoping for more vocal stuff like “you can’t cum unless I tell you to cum” or something along those lines (I was definitely hoping for some freaky shi but I didn’t get my hopes up too high). Like we barely got one panel of it and I just feel that I wished to see more of it. Like he did tell MC to beg once in awhile, but I wanted to see MC grovel and like BEEEGGG for it ya know?
I think the author/illustrator hates drawing feet. WHY ARE THEY ALWAYS WEARING SHOES?! I WANNA SEE SOME TOES!! SOME DAWGS!! Maybe even a little toe sucking/licking..
Why her actual husband kinda fyne shi? Like obviously twins are better but still
Oh he looked so hot in that suit. I also think k he looks best naked tho
Bruh I can’t even be mad or upset abt anyone. They all so gorgeous and smacilcious. they ALL fyne asf
I can imagine how much anxiety honkybara is gonna go through.
This the type of hentai I can read. The man is fine asf and the girl, as disproportion as she is, she’s fine asf as well. Plot is mid so far but overall, it’s not bad
Taeui CANNOT catch a break mans always being kidnapped but he’s so used to it
That was one of the best tentacle smut I’ve seen. And it was literally just a few panels too ready for the real deal
Idc what yall say, it was cute yes it was very fast paced but it’s a short story so I dont expect too much plot and angst
Minwoo isn’t even good for him anyways… he’s controlling. MC never even saw him as a candidate. There’s no way ppl thought that he would be 2ML. I for one is glad that he isn’t. And the cover literally showed who will be end game. MC will probably amend the relationship later on, but they won’t be together.
I actually like the ML, but maybe it’s bc I’m not too big of a fan of childhood lovers.