NO ONE TOLD ME THE FIRST ONE WOULD BE SAD WTFFFF (/TДT)/
These proportions are getting outta hand. The top's hand literally wraps around the bottom's thigh
I cam back to catch up on this story after a couple months... But i hate to say it has gone wayyy down hill. The artstyle is starting to look like those exaggerated aegyo, jelly artstyles making everything friking shinning and I feel like they've gotten paler. The top is also ENORMOUS and the bottom is being drawn like a FRIKING CHILD like bye wtf.
Honestly I hate how the story for the main couple ended. Hyesung was taken advantage of, baby trapped, and manipulated into giving birth and caring for the baby with Dojin even though that went against their original agreement. I honestly don't care that they had a soul bond or whatever, the author was just trying to add in more little details to make Dojin look good and make Hyesung look like a shallow train reck.
And all this bullshit about "Hyesung was a brat and a greedy b***h" is the same bullcrap that men spout when they say r@pe/assult vicims 'deserve' it. I'd be pretty pissed too if a rich man tried to pay me of to carry his baby after he impregnated me by mistake. And his personality has nothing to do with his trauma. Dojin could have had a baby with a surrogate or literally any other individual who CONSENTED to sacrificing their bodily autonomy.
I'm convinced that the author just hates Hyesung. The fact that Hyesung changed his mind about "loving" Dojin so quickly after they caught him and Heesoo was what pissed me off the most. He was literally willing to trust complete strangers in another country just to escape his life in Korea but then 5 chapters later he doesn't really protest or seem that resentful at all.
People forget that happily ever after doesn't always mean that two characters get married or fall in love. And Heesoo even tried to guilt trip Hyesung for abandoning Byul instead of worrying about the fact that an omega fresh outta labor had just ran out of the hospital. Hyesung said it himself right to Dojin's face: "What choice did I have!" This is the same thing that women in the real world have to deal with and I'm sick that people are glorifying it just because of the artstyle and the ending.
Disagree or hate on me if you want. I said what I said.
DID YOU KISS THE BRICK BEFORE YOU THREW IT AT MY FACE (Tε(#T)Σ
Honestly there are just so many bad things about this story bruh. Plot was so bad that even the gorgeous art style couldn't mask it.
First of all, there was practically no character development at all for any of the characters. It's literally just Kyle using Beel to satisfy his own desires and Beel just taking it. As well as causing him unnecessary trauma like getting r@p3d... The worst part is, Kyle didn't even consider lifting the hypnosis when he found out Beel was physically and mentally incapable of defending himself.
Once he did lift the hypnosis to reveal Beel's true feelings, he was unsatisfied by Beel's answer and immediately hypnotized him again (in the middle of him pretty much r@ping him). If he actually felt a little guilty about it, he would have actually tried to talk to Beel in an appropriate setting and have a reasonable convo about ACTUALLY SAVING HIM instead of just fuking him.
Lastly, so many readers buy into the whole "Kyle is just a crybaby cinnamon roll puppy" like dude you cant be fukin fr, no he's not... He's a literal man-child who manipulates/forces his victim to "love him" and "enjoy" being r@p3d. Rather than have some empathy or consideration towards Beel, he cries about not getting his way and uses magic to get what he wants without even trying to improve the situation.
I'm so mad at how bad this story turned out because there were so many opportunities for character and story development but neither ended up happening. Not even a "happy" ending it was just a half-assed twisted ending where the victim gets no justice and continues to suffer within the grasp of their r@pist.
Can someone recommend me some stories with a dynamic like ML that looks and acts a little crazy but is actually silly x MC that puts up with their BS. Kinda like the couples in "Waterside Night" and "Don't Mess With the Puppy". Please and thank you!
Can someone recommend me some stories with this dynamic? Like ML that looks and acts a little crazy but is actually silly x MC that puts up with their BS. Kinda like the couples in "Waterside Night" and "Don't Mess With the Puppy". Please and thank you!
I know the original was written in Korean so it's probably not as obvious to the author, but the fact that her name is just "Kitty" with an extra syllable at the end is so funny to me lollll. I was thinking that her name should have been a dead give away that she was a cat (≧▽≦)
I relate so much to Naho when he loses his self-esteem. I wish I had someone too.
For people out there saying stuff like "You chose to read it so you can't complain": you have to read at least part of a story to know what it's about and to build a reasonable perspective on it. If people were to just read the summary or the tags of a story (which on this website can be misleading) wouldn't it be kind of unfair to the author and the story? Especially if readers are genuinely curious to see if a talented artist/author like this one happened to write a banger.
Also, readers giving positive or negative feedback about the author or the story is a normal thing. That's why opinions, free will, and critics exist. I am not trying to defend a specific group of people, but I do know that some people take things too far and get worked up over a disagreement on A STORY. And disagreements about opinions, not morals.
Anyways, that's just my input but regardless, happy reading everyone.
Hey guys, I'm looking for some angsty betrayal plot BL recommendations. Like the friends/family of one of the MCs betrays them/double crosses and the seemingly mean or evil love interest turns out to be nice and helps him heal or get revenge. I know that's really specific, but it's hard to find a good drama BL that isn't just based on friking r@pe.

















