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Honestly there are just so many bad things about this story bruh. Plot was so bad that even the gorgeous art style couldn't mask it.
First of all, there was practically no character development at all for any of the characters. It's literally just Kyle using Beel to satisfy his own desires and Beel just taking it. As well as causing him unnecessary trauma like getting r@p3d... The worst part is, Kyle didn't even consider lifting the hypnosis when he found out Beel was physically and mentally incapable of defending himself.
Once he did lift the hypnosis to reveal Beel's true feelings, he was unsatisfied by Beel's answer and immediately hypnotized him again (in the middle of him pretty much r@ping him). If he actually felt a little guilty about it, he would have actually tried to talk to Beel in an appropriate setting and have a reasonable convo about ACTUALLY SAVING HIM instead of just fuking him.
Lastly, so many readers buy into the whole "Kyle is just a crybaby cinnamon roll puppy" like dude you cant be fukin fr, no he's not... He's a literal man-child who manipulates/forces his victim to "love him" and "enjoy" being r@p3d. Rather than have some empathy or consideration towards Beel, he cries about not getting his way and uses magic to get what he wants without even trying to improve the situation.
I'm so mad at how bad this story turned out because there were so many opportunities for character and story development but neither ended up happening. Not even a "happy" ending it was just a half-assed twisted ending where the victim gets no justice and continues to suffer within the grasp of their r@pist.