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I liked it. But after a while, the story kinda messy. Just my opinion. I feel like it’s a mush up of many plots AHAHH.

It feels a bit confusing to me. Ml’s behaviour doesn’t make sense. The friends hang out with the guys who bullied mc? Then time skip and suddenly ml chasing. Like plots on impulse