beta
The story line is good the characters are interesting and has there own personality it was nice story to read the only problem I had with it was the brother he rubbed me off the wrong way the moment he was introduced in the story like I guess he's just trying to look out for his brother who is the MC but like he get carried away to much like I don't think it was necessary for him to say "I'm his boyfriend" when he could just say "I'm his brother" people would leave bro and when he punched the MC boyfriend and not even giving him a chance I just couldn't with the guy anymore so everytime I saw him I just skipped to the point where I'd didn't see him. It's my opinion on this character but other than that all the other characters are really nice would I recommend it yes its not a bad story definitely has potential and doesn't have some sort of rape or abuse in it which is good so yes you can read it I'm just letting you know about the MC brother