
It really did have the potential, it felt like it would do good if it was the usual 6 chapter BL.
Ch 4: Uke and son doing their best to survive while seme tries to continue college. End it with a cliffhanger where they finally see each other
Ch 5: continue the cliffhanger, the two catch up, uke feeling somewhat hesitant to be with seme. Seme insists. They confess, they kiss.
Ch 6: steamy sex. Boom pregnant.
Ch 6.5: epilogue, they old, they die, their children happy with their family visits their grave.
Cliche but better ig