It's too... Childish? Not in a way that it's written by an amateur, I really respect the time, effort, and the beauty of the story itself.
It's just targeted to a much younger audience. Teenagers, I mean. I am a young adult who read stories like these in elementary and read rated stories by high school, trust me, I've grown tired of it now for my early exposure.
I just can't enjoy it anymore now that I've been... Woke. Also, the main characters are kids. They'll make love and give me r-rated scenes but I'd still see them as children. I'd actually prefer it if they look a lot older or THEY literally get older. Like, with the dad's age.
In any case, I'm dropping this at it's climax. I enjoyed it while I read it but I would really love it if I transmigrate in this story myself and romance the dad. I mean, come on. He's too hot to stay single
It's too... Childish? Not in a way that it's written by an amateur, I really respect the time, effort, and the beauty of the story itself.
It's just targeted to a much younger audience. Teenagers, I mean. I am a young adult who read stories like these in elementary and read rated stories by high school, trust me, I've grown tired of it now for my early exposure.
I just can't enjoy it anymore now that I've been... Woke. Also, the main characters are kids. They'll make love and give me r-rated scenes but I'd still see them as children. I'd actually prefer it if they look a lot older or THEY literally get older. Like, with the dad's age.
In any case, I'm dropping this at it's climax. I enjoyed it while I read it but I would really love it if I transmigrate in this story myself and romance the dad. I mean, come on. He's too hot to stay single