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The concept is fine, not good, not bad, just mediocre. The art though. Ugh. I'd do anything to be with the older brother. He's ML material. I was really devastated when they gave him a match in the story. They should've let him stay single and give him for us readers to fantasize about.
The character designs are good. But the storyline? Not so much. The pacing is too poor. They had to drag the story just for the FL to settle her feelings for Ex but the elements added in between to keep the readers entertained is not fun at all. They don't make sense and does not contribute to the story either. I'm talking about her recruiting a foreign child from the slums only to forget her in the next chapter.
They also forgot Nivea, the girl who was supposedly the chosen one who snatched the FL's position. The story forgot her existence entirely like a cockroach.
Honestly, the writing is bad for me but the art is too good to pass up so I read and read. Didn't make me feel any better at all.
The couple didn't feel like a couple, even if ot did, their romance wasn't interesting. They also moved past the ML's manipulations and the things the FL suffered because of them. Like some kind of a plot armor.
FL also fell too fast. It honestly felt like she never learned from her mistake and fell for another toxic guy. Girl's a psycho magnet.
I would honestly enjoy this much better had they just made the older brother the main character. Not with her of course, but with someone else and feature their romance. Or better yet, a story featuring their parents' story! I bet they'd be more exciting to read.
Their parents are a fun couple I would invest a story into.
Honestly, I didn't enjoy this story. It had bad writing, poor character choices, and a plot armor on the ML. Too bad, the art was astonishing too.