beta
Okay so, there are a lot of plotholes here. Obviously because it's a short story, everything's so fast they barely resolved the conflicts and left most of them hanging. Thus, the plotholes.
Anyways, it's a good concept and the art is good, mostly in the sensual way which fits the yaoi and smut genre. I want more though. It could've been better if they made it longer and reduce the pacing.