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It was a wholesome story. Short and therefore a lot of plotholes, but it was wholesome nonetheless.
I really loved the concept. The romance was fast in general, but it was alright considering how short the story was. I also loved how good the characters were. Both the designs and the personality. If it was longer we could've seen more of it, but alas, such is the fate of a short story.
If you think I'm holding a grudge because I kept emphasizing the shortness of the story, then you're right. I am upset at how short it was and I always will be when it comes to short stories that are this good.
Honestly, it's the short ones that are good. It's basically a thing now.