Just looking at the cover, like…this is messing with my head, help

There’s no agency in this… the drawings are good, but that’s it.
The story isn’t engaging at all.

I hope they cook up something to balance all the good.
Otherwise, this is another story of how life is doing from good to great of a very gifted and god chosen boy, love by everyone and can’t do wrong.

Even Jesus had Roman’s against him, dammit.
But I guess this is for some healing story, some protection of a life someone want?
But I can understand, I too fantasize to be a better person and have people love you.
Like anybody else.

And the “romance”? Why is always like this?
It’s not like a hate romance, it’s just, the portrait of such relationship are quite awful most of the time. And this is not starting well.

The story seems to be written by a child/teenager for now.

That said, this clearly not my cup of tea.

To be able to draw…always come with a curse.
I can’t unsee the long neck tags that holds the mc head like a cheap counterfeit Barbie doll on the cover.

Help.

I’m having flashbacks.
That single strand of hair in the middle of the forehead, that hairstyle is so alike, just the green eye ps instead of blue. And of course, different art style.


Still, not my cup of tea.

…have some SPOILER from the novel…
I can see the plot holes already in the early chapters…
My god. I have mixed feeling about this.



























The harem is not a core part…
BUT all those woman…he gonna marry each of them, one at time.

Hear me out… it’s just a possibility, but DAMN
I can work. Their intention are on the line, no marriage with Ash, but alliance.
So…if in the future they meet…MAYBE. MAYBE IT CAN HAPPEN.













I know there are folks out there shipping Ash and Lukas, I can smell you, ya rotten folks
( ° ^ °)

That…that was actually a very fun puzzle.
Imma gonna do something similar for my dnd sessions—-

Who the heck wrote the story? Why would they give a gadget that translates languages before killing her anyway??
Why they wrote her so brainless?

The drama here is wild, the whole pregnancy, and the relationship.
The soap opera level of madness, I’m getting that vibe of “Georgie!” And other old unhinged plot of the 80’

Who wrote this? Seriously. That dude should have gone insane as that point.
It’s like a person just playing an MMORPG and feeling no pain that the actual character felt, and kept his ration.
I believe he would barely be rational at that point, after all that torture and time.
Sort of going murderous after coming back.

It’s clear that the writer lacks experience, and I’m not saying that he need to suffer to write about sufferance.
It’s that they lack writing experience in the first place, one should start first with something close to them, but even the start, the failure, the most human topic is just skimmed over like a grocery list of misery and failure.

Also- why is the archduke a member of the night watcher?!! I can’t- lmao
Is this the bad version of John Snow?! The evil timeline-(≧∀≦)

Chris, the eldest son of a prestigious family that has been bestowed the profession of the sword fo...

  • Author: okamoto takeya,neet
  • Genres: Seinen / Action / Adventure / Drama / Fantasy / Adaptation

I’ll wait for more chapters before judging this