Better drawings than some initial pub.
But my opinion on the story doesn’t change.
It’s a story about a rotten world with dumb adversaries.
For those that are for some heroic protagonist, you are in the wrong place.
There is no goodness here.
There’s exploitation, hoarding powers to become stronger and stronger.
The part that narrates old legends are interesting in their simple structure, as old tales are.

Whatever reason of the past, the protagonist is a ruthless sociopath now, on the alignments chart he is Evil Neutral.
Not that others are better, their are either stupid, hypocrites, or just trash that are also evil to the bone.
The protagonist get gradually OP, there will always be some negative element, downsides to some “power elements” to keep the rhythm interesting and keep the reader engaged.
but we all know, he will be alright, completing is objectives by any means possible.
Is he smart? Yes.
There are some other rare instances when someone elso also have “smart” moment. But are very rare. Women are stereotypically stupid or heavily emotionally driven, but like any emotionally driven being there, they will die, or maybe not, but defeated none the less, or simply explode in some way.

I’m not a fan, I don’t get the hype. I’m trying to be objective, but still, inevitably biased.
It’s overrated imo.
Among the other Xiangxia stories, yes, it’s one of the best among those.
But those stories are just…subpar.
Far from being the best novel outside that genre.

What happened?
Σ(  ̄□ ̄||) why are the chapters of an shoujo romance got updated here?!

I’m starting to question what is a middle age man…because the protagonist is surely does not look like one.
Look like a teen age boy, because of course, he”s the protagonist.
The quality on the cover is not present in the content.
The body proportion seems to get squished in a bad way sometime.
And it’s just damn random.

Who wrote this really.
Tell the artist drawing to go do exercise and practice.
Because this story need to be rewritten anyway to be worth the effort of being illustrated.
And for the Lord’s Sake. get those young girls out of the romance radar

Here’s my two cents of opinions about this.
“Amelia the level Zero Hero”
The title is riding on the same wave of all the other like…”level 1 ranked” and similar stories.
Here it is relevant, yet not. And it make sense for the kind the story they are trying to tell.
There’s a ground of a good idea of a story.

I sort of like the protagonist, but, it lacks some depth.
This issue I directly tied to ONE of MAIN ISSUE, which are the dialogues.
They are a few alright exchange, but MOST OF DIALOGUES are not thought out enough, they lack a purpose, they lack and intention, they are repetitive, and some conversations seems want to say something, but they end up one sided and self conclusive. Pointless. Not even for jokes.
.
It repeats the pattern of “introducing the adversaries before their reality gets flipped upsidedown by the mc”.
And it’s the same as hearing the same sentence over and over, or just having the same soup all day everyday.

The struggle of the mc against the system are interesting, but the whole world and plot is just setting the mc up to be a Hero anyway. I mean, it’s implied in the title.
At this point, I believe the ultimate rebellion of the mc to break out of that fate imposed on her is to break the forth wall like Deadpool. (Would be funny)
But she won’t, because she does have that “hero” mentality.

It has potential. But who wrote the story, is clearly inexperienced.
The art is not bad, I give that.

Overall. This is a very very simple and linear story. And some action of some character, those too are not much thought out. Self absorbed conviction that have no regard of much else. Like the fight in ch.45… I don’t want to spoiler, but I want to bring up the memes about Dragon Ball where fights are in the desert and Western Superheroes that fights in cities.

Will I keep reading? Yes. I hope to see that potential that I feel to grow…
Will I be disappointed? I’m used to that at this point.

I can feel my feet. followed a goer
sdt

Reading comics is my favorite thing to do

20 days
I can feel my feet. like the answer
Because im insecure i feel like they could find someone better than me

Just looking at the cover, like…this is messing with my head, help

There’s no agency in this… the drawings are good, but that’s it.
The story isn’t engaging at all.

I hope they cook up something to balance all the good.
Otherwise, this is another story of how life is doing from good to great of a very gifted and god chosen boy, love by everyone and can’t do wrong.

Even Jesus had Roman’s against him, dammit.
But I guess this is for some healing story, some projection of a life someone want?
But I can understand, I too fantasize to be a better person and have people love you.
Like anybody else.

And the “romance”? Why is always like this?
It’s not like a hate romance, it’s just, the portrait of such relationship are quite awful most of the time. And this is not starting well.

The story seems to be written by a child/teenager for now.

That said, this clearly not my cup of tea.

To be able to draw…always come with a curse.
I can’t unsee the long neck tags that holds the mc head like a cheap counterfeit Barbie doll on the cover.

Help.

I’m having flashbacks.
That single strand of hair in the middle of the forehead, that hairstyle is so alike, just the green eye ps instead of blue. And of course, different art style.


Still, not my cup of tea.

…have some SPOILER from the novel…
I can see the plot holes already in the early chapters…
My god. I have mixed feeling about this.



























The harem is not a core part…
BUT all those woman…he gonna marry each of them, one at time.

Hear me out… it’s just a possibility, but DAMN
I can work. Their intention are on the line, no marriage with Ash, but alliance.
So…if in the future they meet…MAYBE. MAYBE IT CAN HAPPEN.













I know there are folks out there shipping Ash and Lukas, I can smell you, ya rotten folks
( ° ^ °)

That…that was actually a very fun puzzle.
Imma gonna do something similar for my dnd sessions—-

Who the heck wrote the story? Why would they give a gadget that translates languages before killing her anyway??
Why they wrote her so brainless?

The drama here is wild, the whole pregnancy, and the relationship.
The soap opera level of madness, I’m getting that vibe of “Georgie!” And other old unhinged plot of the 80’

Who wrote this? Seriously. That dude should have gone insane as that point.
It’s like a person just playing an MMORPG and feeling no pain that the actual character felt, and kept his ration.
I believe he would barely be rational at that point, after all that torture and time.
Sort of going murderous after coming back.

It’s clear that the writer lacks experience, and I’m not saying that he need to suffer to write about sufferance.
It’s that they lack writing experience in the first place, one should start first with something close to them, but even the start, the failure, the most human topic is just skimmed over like a grocery list of misery and failure.

Also- why is the archduke a member of the night watcher?!! I can’t- lmao
Is this the bad version of John Snow?! The evil timeline-(≧∀≦)

Chris, the eldest son of a prestigious family that has been bestowed the profession of the sword fo...

  • Author: okamoto takeya,neet
  • Genres: Seinen / Action / Adventure / Drama / Fantasy / Adaptation

I’ll wait for more chapters before judging this