beta
The second couple sold this to me. So much depth, emotion and drama in just 2 chapters. Had a lot of potential for a longer story but I’m still impressed how much was done with so little. Might have helped too that the boss is totally my type. During the first half I already was like “… would you like to step on me fine sir?” (lol) so color me very pleasantly surprised when he wasn’t just a side character.
The story of the first couple, while I wouldn’t call it bad, it just didn’t immerse me in the same way.