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I might not be able to say what's not already said here but
Yeah its right that Jaekyung doesn't have anything else in his life that's important to him other than boxing, training, winning(in matches, not in life lmao) and fucking. Like okay fair we got to see why hes like that and a jerk because of his deadbeat father but how about everything else like, why he's gay or why he has the jinx he has? please, i hope theres a reasonable explanation in the future cus its still confusing and its STILL NOT ENOUGH for his redemption arc.
And please I hope theres a good reason or atleast a good chance why he's still capable of (him) loving?? cus if his childhood didnt actually give him a good example or role to love people then how can he love?? (PS i dont mind if its "Oh its cus Kim Dan changed him!" okay whatever but still, make that a fuel to his ALREADY EXISTING REASON why he should love romantically if there is one. I DONT WANT THAT AS THE MAIN REASON. KIM DAN IS SUPPOSED TO BENEFIT HIS LIFE, NOT ACTUALLY BE HIS LIFE. if yk what I mean. actually idk what I mean.. but you get it bro
In all, its going great I guess I give it a solid 5/10 backstory cus some parts still missing but WE GETTING THERE PEOPLE!