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i hate how everyone (yes even horus) treats seth. Horus is so annoyingly needy and sorry but his feelings for seth literally make no sense, he just seems obsessed to me. I feel like without the lingering inevitability of them ending up together the story would be so much better. Like I know he's not his father but Seth falling in love with his rapist brother's son just genuinely irks me. I fear that this dumbass love plot is gonna end up being his light at the end of the tunnel instead of him actually finding peace within himself....

why are all the members so ominous like wtf. is being annoyingly vague part of the contract or something

hyunjoo stays clowning that unfashionable twink

lmao i love the seme not him making him scream affirmations during sex

jigu is so fucking dumb, i love it

aint no food on that menu

i wonder if this story will outlive me

imma be real the whole jinx thing is dumb asfuck, id rather have had mingwa pull some supernatural bullshit than have the canon be so dumb. If i had written this i wouldve made jaekyungs backstory much darker (like maybe his father was also sexually abusive) which would link to him potentially growing to be hypersexual which would better explain his outbursts and mental health difficulties, as well as his promiscuity in adulthood post his father's death. Then the whole jinx thing could be less of a random thing he got from a bible studying hyung (lmfao) but a truly deep look into jaekyung's psyche, possibly linking to elements of obsessive compulsive disorder which highlights how sticking to his routine is the only way he can prevent himself from mentally unravelling. The jinx is less about forgetting about his past trauma but more like a shameful tradition linked to his hypersexuality that his OCD has integrated into his personal routine so deeply that he's genuinely come to believe that if he doesn't have sex before a match he'll be a useless loser. Meeting dan would then be what makes him realise that thats not the case blah blah blah - mingwa hit me up if you ver decide to rework this story lol

ik people like this so not to yuck on anyones yum or anything but the way in chapter 15 dobin has to continually tell taeoh to get off him and leave his house while taeoh just ignores him was so weird and genuinely annoying

the way sejin has to be subjected to this man for two lifetimes is actually insane