There was just one panel that put me off in chapter 42
Where Bihwan was looking at Minchan flinching and thinking how adorable he looks. For whatever reason the artist decided to make his face totally dark and his eyes scary. I understand it's conveying a dark thought but, it took me out.
Got sexy again when they were having wall sex. Love that. Also love that Bihwan corrected himself and called him Minchan.
What an absolute prick.
This asshole doesn't even understand that she left his selfish ass.
He's talking about how she doesn't know him after a whole year of marriage?
How was she supposed to when all he does is have monologues inside his insufferable head. This asshole never thought it necessary to show her kindness or care, to show AND tell her that he loves her. He thinks she can be fucked like a sex toy and then kept pretty like a doll- all for his pleasure. Never treated her like an equal, like a human, like a partner.
She better not go back to him. He better suffer and grovel for a long time before she gives him the time of day again.
That was a blunt confession / proposal, I'll admit, but I'm glad he didn't beat about the bush. I wish she let him continue speaking. He could have rephrased what he was saying to her in a more convincing and romantic way.
But she completely shut him out and with zero explanations. I kind of wish she rejected him in a better way. This was so abrupt. All of it
I love it! Give me more period drama!
Hi, is anyone else able to see this chapter? It isn't loading for me. Is it a broken link?
I love that he was absolutely losing his cool when she was supporting him lol
He basically proposed near the end.
I wish Laura would get a clue
I love how Shingun is all about Jake's chest.
And sucking his nip with the chain rubbing on it too
Translation quality is not good.
Apart from that, she was staying at a hotel.
So why couldn't she just order room service? You're in an unfamiliar city, there was no need to go out at night.
Just order room service. Shi Yan's footing the bill anyway.
The concept was good
The execution however was lacking.
You have a buff smokeshow and a petite woman- that's the kind of pairing that could drive people mad, in a GOOD WAY
It would have been better if they could have more meaningful conversations. Maybe start off with him being hard on her in the gym, and pushing her to work out some body parts more. With him sounding stern, and her taking it to heart. Then with better communication get to know each other. Maybe also have him talk about some insecurities he might have with his own looks or otherwise.
The sex scene was also a missed opportunity. Have them both be eager but also shy and timid. Her being worried to undress in front of him, lest she turns him off. And him reassuring her that is not the case. That he is more than willing.
More attention to foreplay, especially with her breasts- longer and more detailed nipple play. Get her off with her nips only. This is important since the ex pointed out her flat chest was a turn off.
And THEN get to penetrative sex and her worrying about being so small and tight, and that being even more exhilarating because of the size difference.
Later chapters can have more dynamic sex scenes.
Anyway, a huge missed opportunity with this one-shot
WHY do they "love" each other?
They slept together a few times
And I guess the sex was top tier but what exactly do they know about each other?
I am confused
Maybe the characters who are "awake" during the final run get to leave the game.
If your cassette tape has been removed, or isn't playing, you're an NPC that round.
So far there are only 3 tape players- the one in the car, the silver cassette player and now the black one.
Does that mean during any particular run, no more than 3 players can play the game?
Then how does Doha fit into all this?