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Wasn't too fond of what went down in chapter 1. Even though Shou acknowledged what he did wrong, Kaoru let it slide too easily.
I did appreciate that he stopped himself from penetrative sex every subsequent time after that.
But all of a sudden in the extras after ch4 they're having sex and lots of it.
The panel with Shou saying he loves Kaoru,
But then in a later panel Kaoru thinking that their relationship is still unclear- it was very confusing.
Hopefully volume 2 clears things up a bit.
Overall interesting concept and pretty art- but from a storytelling perspective it's all over the place. The pacing suddenly rushed up in the extra.