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Feel free to choose which to reply to;
1. Threats are conscious manipulation techniques.
2. The more you explain why this and that, are you careful enough to not justify the means and the outcomes?
3. Caesar is not a well written complex character. He's mid at best.
4. Given that he's a lawyer, Leewon is rather unrealistic. Don't use the obvious argument that its fictional. Come up with something constructive.
5. Redeeming qualities of both our MCs (feel free)
6. Not so redeeming qualities^^
7. Overall opinion on the story and its progress. (Alrd had my prev comment on this not far behind)