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Somehow, it all feels rushed and so many loose ends are not tied up together nicely. What about their two friends? Are they never going to be friends with Jake ever again? What of the Carnivores - are they going to live in exile forever? Surely some carnivores are also going to be like that Carnivore gang. It all feels like everything is rushed and the rest to fill the gaps is pure speculation: Robin likes Jake, but then he doesn't, then he does. The leader liked Jake, but being disappointed he was quick to disregard him without hesitation and with as much hatred as he could muster as if he was a herbivore. Speaking of which, even his past wasn't detailed - all that's left is speculation. It's like, "This is what happened, this is how the characters feel, make sense of it and read through breezily." I read the author's notes, and I get that it's meant to be a shorter story, but it feels incomplete - kind of like that other webtoon- Bitten by Moonlight. At least the people's sentiments in that story are clearer. It's hinted there may be a potential sequel. Please make a sequel. I liked this story but I wish there was more to detail everything and make the missing fragments connect to make a full picture instead of tracing things with one's mind.