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Was the fact that the villain her brother was really the villain , i was hoping fpr the author tp have sympathy tp her brpther, i mean he wasn't a psycopath if it weren't fpr the palace and the nobles , i wished the author will make her brother be nicer not making her a psychopath. Like i really sympathize with the brpther , it wasnt his fault he became like that. This is why i hate steriotypes villains.
I feel pity towards them. The author sucks at this part.