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Every time I read a translation like this I feel like I'm having a stroke. I don't mind MTL, but how hard is it to give a quick proofread?
I like the MC. I feel like the story could have done more with her character concept considering she was essentially a child soldier in her past life.
I actually don't mind that the Duke is (unwillingly) sharing his body with another soul. It's like she has two dads which I dig. Again, the execution of the idea is a bit poor. There's so much they could be doing with it but well instead *waves hand at story*