This is awful. if you wanna know what a nice bdsm story is go read Ang Ang. thank me later.
This may be a bit too nasty, but Ang Ang is just a boring fairy tale, with no understanding of what BDSM is about. Franky, these stories use it for decoration, like an office or school setting, or dressing up as a doctor and nurse for Halloween, with no medical training or experience. A gimmick.
(Almost) No "realistic" BDSM story would be "Ang-ang-type-enjoyable". A scene in "real" BDSM might be very sexy and fic-enjoyable, but this is not the whole of it. I know, it is about how the author expresses this scenes, but I think anyways it would be too much "fiction" anyways (to be too sexy or "too much" of only the sexy parts). Ang Ang is a BDSM story, a nice one. But still, just a story. Not "real" BDSM.
forget about the dick, forget about the pussy
it's just bad as it is with all the assault
are we about to go on a guilt trip? poor doc, dan has a thing to make everything about him seems wrong and dirty. must protct the baby for what is to come
C'mon guys, stop this chasing game. It'll get boring in no time. At least the smut is good.
mothef*cker be like, let me rearange some organs and deslocate a shoulder with my finger
Dear author, are u trying to get us scared? Hooked? It's not working. It's boring. There are no sight of redemption arc for anyone. Nothing. It's just shallow and selfish pain. We know MC is suffering. The son is just a younger short-sighted version of his father. So what? Do you really want us to cheer for a cute romance arc? Where? I mean, even from MC's perspective, everything is just superficial and over-simplified. Also, I hate how this mansion is everything we have, even for a possible resolution of conflict. Please, are there life beyond the gates?
Oh god, this is just horrible. I mean, the plot is a mess, there are too much plot holes, the relationship is all over the place, too many things just brushed off like nothing. For real? Don't waste your time. There's NOTHING to compensate the confusion to get to the "end" of this story. I mean it, the end is just.... i'm tired.