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Leading lady is generic kind, soft, doormat shoujo girl but don't think she's a pushover because sometimes she gets "angry" (like she'll glare at someone maybe once or twice. The ML is kindo of interesting but they don't really delve deep into him nor flesh out his personality that much like he's interest in the FL but "why?" I do not know maybe because "she's not like other girls" because she didn't know he was the prince and he was into that. Also once again the trope of everyone who's mean to our MC is either stupid (only when they're maybe gonna get redeemed as a cast member) or evil/wrong because how could our our MCs ever do anything wrong. Everything is overly redundant for the sake of it like maybe ask "why do they care so much about status and money?" Or "why would they think lowly of the common folk?" Maybe explore that instead of just going "statuses are evil and poor people are people too" yea no shit but why do the other characters think otherwise what would make a person think like this is far more interesting.