beta
The initial idea was great, was loving the buildup, the angst and the characters but then it kinda flatlined into a huge mess with the plot constantly changing, along with plot holes. All their individual ambitions just changed all of a sudden and that sucked, the romance was also too sudden. Maybe I'm just picky but I was expecting so much more, I really liked Asher's character though so it sucks that he didn't have too much to play in it till the end