I feel like the story was just really rushed for no reason other than the author possibly wanting it to be a quick story? But I feel the plot and world building was too much for how short it has been, too the point it’s a lot of information at once and also I am not a huge fan of toxic relationships but this duo would’ve been so good if it was more of a slow burn and the Seme learned to be independent after some time. And I don’t really like that they made the Uke possessive too, it just feels like they would be stagnant together, they would never be bettering each other, just keeping each other down. With all of that said it was good but it has so much lost potential that I almost wish they would re-write this.
I feel like the story was just really rushed for no reason other than the author possibly wanting it to be a quick story? But I feel the plot and world building was too much for how short it has been, too the point it’s a lot of information at once and also I am not a huge fan of toxic relationships but this duo would’ve been so good if it was more of a slow burn and the Seme learned to be independent after some time. And I don’t really like that they made the Uke possessive too, it just feels like they would be stagnant together, they would never be bettering each other, just keeping each other down.
With all of that said it was good but it has so much lost potential that I almost wish they would re-write this.