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Might just be me but I find it a bit distasteful to reference Kiss me Liar, the original story but not reference it accurately. If I remember correctly, Josh finds Yeonwoo on the side of the building and offers him a water and has a small chitchat before Keith interrupts but also besides that is the stark difference in art of portraying Yeonwoo and Keith. I didn't even recognize Yeonwoo until his name was said. It defeats the purpose of continuity but I guess doesn't have much bearing on this story on its own.
I know people said this is a good story based on the novel but its such a stupid plotline to have Josh willingly and purposefully jerk Chase off to relieve the pheremones? I guess this story will do the same in not explaining to us how their omegaverse works.