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Sorry but the dialogue is so cringe and marry sue right now. Her suddenly having a lisp is kind of embarrassing and there are some contradictions already. The Duke is a high noble and also a Villian Family (meaning dangerous) but our main character just held his hand to lead him to the orphanage director. Does she not think that touching a high noble as a peasant orphan might come off as an offensive?? I mean she should know better since she is some what reincarnated and mature. Another thing is she actually does know that she is “dirty” and surprised that the duke protected her in the carriage because she thought he wouldn’t touch her… uhm… a minor contradiction but still. I mean I guess this story is just not serious and actually more focused on comedy. Feels more fanfictiony