People who think this story took a 180 turn need to drop the BL and fanfics and grab some real books to train their reading comprehension.
The story and the characters personalities and development is clear. If you think this is a drastic change or that Cha is a victim, you didn’t understand anything and truly need to read the story again.
This is why authors are reluctant to hear opinions from foreigners and global fanbase, because you all don’t understand the stories. You all let your own traumas and morals project into a work of fiction and don’t understand the stories. And some of you are even shameless enough to say this to the authors’ social media accounts.
Touch grass and read some actual books. And then come back to read BL. Let’s see if you understand better that way.
I was there. From the beginning. From chapter one! I’ve bought the physical copies. I’ve been a fan of Sachimo’s work for years this story means so much to me! It’s one of the very few, if not the only, wholesome yaoi I’ve liked. The way their love for each other is so pure and absolute has had me hooked for years. I want to think that Shin will stand his ground and not go to Shige’s agency, but I know that he IS willing to do whatever for Shige. But then if he goes, all the sacrifices Shige has made for years will be for naught. So, I’m not sure how Sachimo will unfold this drama. They have a tendency to write happy ending though. So I’m not too worried. But still looking forward to volume 11. I can’t believe it’s been ten volumes already!
This was so bad. And it’s not even due to the dark elements but the wrong use of them. It feels like a fanfic made into a manwha. Poor poor quality
The dude struggled with belt cuffs in the beginning when he could have just untie them? It would have been more accurate to be handcuffed with real handcuffs. Then he manages to escape but he forgives Ian and then drops by his criminal friend’s house. Then he pretends to struggle but despite his huge physique he was a weak ass dude? This is one of those short manwha created only to fulfill a specific fetish. It’s not even traumatic, it was clearly created as fap material for a specific group.
It all started with a nice idea of a plot and then it all went downhill either because the bottom disappointed or the author decided to make the bottom get raped by random characters.
I told you all this was gonna happen. This author doesn’t know how to make bottoms get fucked by only one top. This author always includes the bottoms getting raped by random characters and the boyfriends always have to deal with the rapists. I don’t even know why I keep coming back to this story. Maybe I’m a masochist or Sehan is too pretty idk. I hate it.
I’m waiting for this author to drop a story with a blonde top and dark hair bottom because the art is so pretty!
I love the art style but I’m kinda bored and tired of college students BL :(
Plus, I thought the bottom was smarter but he’s so easily agitated by the top that makes it boring. I wish he could have had more of a personality and attitude towards the top. But he lets the top provoke him so easily and he gives in so easily is boring. And I know the bottom has a complex because he’s a bit stuck up. But still. I expect stuck up bottoms to stand their ground. Not be so easily manipulated.
Bro istg I want to get into this type of style in BL but I can’t seem to do it.
Maybe I’m too used to Korean manwha and I stopped reading shonen ai a long time ago. So, if anyone knows if this will eventually have explicit content please let me know. The characters are really attractive but I don’t want to get attached or a story and wait five years for a simple full screen kiss.
This story was so promising in the beginning. I’m a fan of slow burns but not like this. The slow burn is enjoyable when they both long for each other but for whatever reason can’t be together just yet. But this type of slow burn is inefficient and unsatisfying. Because it’s hard to believe that in this day and age (this story is set in a modern period) two adult men lack so much emotional depth. You mean to tell me two grown men don’t know if they like the other or not? I’m assuming is due to Koreans lack of communication skills. But this is beyond that. Plus, SPOILER. This story dragged soooo much and just in the last four chapters Jewon confesses and they fuck and start dating. The conclusion to the story, after so much dragging and inability to identify their own feelings, was too abrupt to the point of being boring.
I still come back out of habit to proofread my own translations, but I give it a 4/10.
The way they were in their own little world they almost forgot Sunhwa was even there lmaooooooo
Now all that’s left is to see Nanjo’s pov and how is he going to settle his feelings and his own complexes. Because Mokyeon showed him that the one he actually likes is Mokyeon. But we know Nanjo has issues admitting his desires or tainting this perfect image he has curated throughout the years.
Season two will only have 20 chapters so something tells me we already crossed the hardest part of the misunderstanding. Season two will probably start with Nanjo’s pov and then they’ll settle things with Sunhwa and start being lovey dovey right after.
Danrim said on Twitter “I’ll come back for season two when you all start forgetting about me lmaooo” I’m not letting her! Petition to not let her forget about continuing this story. She’s so funny on Twitter. Please be respectful of her if you decide to interact with people. She’s super close to her fans.
Feels like it was written by a 16yo or something. The whole bdsm was so amateur-like when the seme is supposed to be an expert bc it’s his kink and all. The earrings as nipple piercings felt so awkward and wrong too. Like who tf uses normal earrings as nipple piercings.
The drawing of the uke was awkward altogether. The dude looked like he had snorted cocaine the whole time. His expressions were always off and uncomfortable to watch. And the drawing style is not bad. The seme and the wife were super attractive and their expressions were well drawn. But the uke looked in shock the whole time with his eyebrows up. Like the dude was on drugs the whole time.
I know it’s a short story. So I get the lack of attention to detail but it felt vain and of bad quality when there are short stories out there that are a lot more fun or interesting to read. Take the fallen lamb as an example.
Nanjo likes Mokyeon. But he’s not used to follow his desires. Since he’s a chaebol and all. He has to maintain certain perfect image. That’s why he pushed away Mokyeon when Sunhwa opened the door. Because he doesn’t want him to see his flaws. But he feels more himself, more comfortable with his desires, with Mokyeon. He’s been more faithful to Mokyeon than he’s ever been to Sunhwa.
Maybe he hasn’t been planning to snatch Mok from the beginning, but what I thought was true. He actually likes and feels more attracted to Mok. Sunhwa was just the door to his true sexuality. And since Sunhwa plays the innocent little girl, he felt Sunhwa wasn’t gonna demand too much from him, emotionally and sexually speaking. That’s why he’s in denial regarding Sunhwa’s true personality. Because that means that he has to accept that he was wrong and that the one he actually desires is Mokyeon.
I don’t even know what’s gonna happen for the next and final chapter of season one. I’m guessing Mok will actually penetrate him. Since Mok realized Nanjo has been more faithful to him than Sunhwa and he also responded the kiss so willingly even while Sunhwa was in the next room. Mokyeon now knows Nanjo also desires him. There’s no way he’s gonna back off now.
I can’t wait for Nanjo’s pov and too se how Sunhwa will exit this relationship once he finds out Mok and Nanjo like and desire each other!
This is the type of wholesome story that people who dislike good plot development love I guess? It was a cute story to read when there’s nothing else to read but it’s boring. This is when you write a trope and not a plot. The trope is omegaverse. Therese sex and a baby. That’s it. There was no room for development or improvement because the characters immediately talked things out. This is why most author don’t use communication when writing stories. Because they’re boring like this and it doesn’t give room for any kind of plot development. Definitely the type of story most moralists would enjoy though since there’s nothing to marinate and talk about.
Lord help me. I cannot wait a week for this story. I know Narim promised that Mokyeon wouldn’t sleep with Sunhwa again, but having Mok ask Sunhwa to spend the night with him almost gave me a heart attack. If it wasn’t because Narim is trying to make us hate Sunhwa less, they would have slept together again! The plot saved us. But then again they’re gonna have a threesome again. How is that not Mok sleeping with Sunhwa again? Unless this time Nanjo and Sunhwa start with the sex, so Mokyeon can prove to Nanjo that Sunhwa has been manipulating him into having rough sex and then Mok can’t take it anymore and shit hits the fan by either Mok trying to take Nanjo bc he can’t stand seeing him having sex with someone else or by storming out of the room.
Idk maaaaan I’m desperate. I need Nanjo’s pov too. I guess will have to wait for season two for that
This is one of those moments I love the Spanish fandom so much. We all rooting and loving Mokyeon while the English fandom is always trashing on the tops for whatever reason. Is Mokyeon a saint? Of course not. Is Nanjo a saint? Of course not. Let’s not talk about the twink. Full trash.
There are only three chapters left for the end of season one. So I’m guessing we’re either getting Nanjo’s pov or Mokyeon lose it and sleeping around after giving up on Nanjo.
He loves him. That’s why he broke things off with him. Because he doesn’t want to give into his sadistic tendencies with him. Nanjo is not just a hole for him. He’s in love with him.
Family? My brother in Christ, you came to the conclusion that you both are family? This poor dude never had a proper demonstration of what a real relationship between two lovers or family is like. He has a distorted twisted view of life. He was doomed to be a masochist because what he needed was therapy. Readers didn’t even need to romanticize this. The bottom did it himself. I’m used to reading twisted stories and they tend to be my favorites. But in those twisted stories the bottoms are always aware that they’re as fucked yo as the tops. This dude went and said “I know this is wrong but we’re family so it’s okay” whaaaat? Stupid fucakss bottoms like this that act all sweet and lovable in a red flag twisted relationship piss me off so bad brooooo
This story should have been uploaded on the other website so people could comment free of the moralist spreading their agenda in EVERY SINGLE chapter.
It’s funny how they say “I’m not easily shocked, I’ve read some fucked up things”
You haven’t. If you think this is horrifying, you need to spend a day on the other website or just stick to your vanilla wholesome shit.
End of the announcement.
Mokyeon hold it broooo I got you, from right here. I know Nanjo loves you and he realized that you treat him differently to how you treat Sunhwa. I know Nanjo realized you cooked seafood just for him. I’m gonna cry the twink is finally fading away bc Nanjo ditched him on his birthday. I think Nanjo is using the contract as an excuse to keep them separated. Nobody is gonna convince me otherwise. Nanjo likes Mokyeon. But he never thought he could become Mokyeon’s type so he has to go through all the trouble of pretending to be in love with Sunhwa in order to keep Mokyeon’s attention on him. That’s why he brought up the contract. “If you don’t fulfill the contract and stay away from Sunhwa, I’m not going to sleep with you anymore” bc Nanjo probably thought that Mok was obsessed with Sunhwa. Aaaaaah my babieeeees please marry soon. But after a hundred chapters of making love please and thank you
People are so dumb istg. They had a ton shit of trigger warnings and here they are. All the wimps crying about it. About how this is fetishizing, about wanting the top to grow back and how the bottom is shitty. These people will fight anything just for the sake of being confrontational. Don’t y’all get tired. You’re not gonna change the world complaining on an illegal site about these topics. Go outside, touch some grass and join an ong or something.
BL manwha will never change bc it’s KOREAN and Koreans love and live for good looks. That’s what sells. That’s the main selling point in the industry. Creators and authors have said this themselves. They’re never looking to be insightful or deep serious about matters of the world with BOYS LOVE bc BL is a fetish for straight people. The fact that some of us queer people read it doesn’t mean the at have to cater to our need for representation. If you need representation of real life go and protest or something. BL, yaoi, is about entertainment not advocating. Now get your heads out of your asses and let people have something. Smh.