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I swear that I’ve never been able to finish a story with this author because their ideas and themes are super cool. And they usually include superpowers or the likes. But they never get properly developed.
In this story I’ve read at least four times between the dude becoming immortal, or dying and then becoming immortal or time traveling and then denying he time traveled and then saying himself he time traveled, twice. One to himself. So I don’t know if the author is getting confused with their own story or the writing is bad. Because between trying to pay attention to the “relationship” we also have to pay attention to whatever the author is trying to tell in the story behind this pharmaceutical.
So, long story short, this story is all over the place and I’m not even mad because the top is smaller than the bottom and super pretty and the bottom is buff and hot. So, whatever. I’ll stick to it and enjoy whatever this is