beta
There are some things I would still defend (like not taking the twins that seriously, coz let's be real threat lvl: 1/1000) BUT GIRLLLLL
1) I get that she doesnt know the future anymore coz everything is changing, BUT SHE KNEW HOW STRONG THE ML IS AND SHOULD HAVE SIDED WITH HIM
2) She should have shared her back up plan (remove her brothers shield and have soldiers ready for an attack) with others so even if she faints other ppl know what to do to aviod imprisonment [the fact that her side got caught when she fainted is proof that her side is too weak without her, as a leader she should make her team strong enough to operate without her ESPECIALLY WHEN SHE HAS A POWERHOUSE OF MEMBERS]
3) dont get me wrong, ik she liked the ML from the beginning but she was hiding it for the sake of her family, but the fact that she doesnt hide it as much does make it feel rushed, again IK she didnt just randomly start liking him, its been building for a while, but the reactions aren't paced well enough