beta
at first, i feel bad for ayne because everything just kept getting messier.
but now that i think about it, she is getting more pathetic as the story goes on, and she isn't really handling the situation well. she lacks denial in situations, and she is not good at proving points which can be so annoying. she is being taken control by the mls but she is not minding them, and complains why she's in a hell hole, but in truth, she literally made herself fall in that hell hole. if she ever denies them, she'll easily give up which is pointless and that makes her irrelevant.
i thought she was gonna be a strong fl, but she turned out to be a weak one. i gotta say this had a lot of potential, but with things getting more problematic, and the fl being pathetic, i just can't read it. but who knows? the story might pick itself back up. if that ever happens, then i'll continue reading it.