I'm sorry the art is pretty bad so I can't take it seriously
The art is fantastic. If the complaint is that it switches between serious moments to cartoony moments, then they just don't like comics.
Like how is the random dog noses any different then sudden chibi. Also they use it the dog noses in the same way other mangaka artist remove the nose for expression.
I have read a lot so I've read my fair share of stories with bad art, some of them I pushed through and genuinely liked the story but I just don't think this story compensates for the fact that I don't resonate with this art style. just as you said my comment was just my opinion and that doesn't mean that it is bad and others can't enjoy it!










This could've been sooo good without that huge age gap, don't get me wrong age gap is sometimes really fun to read but the interaction this 11y/o and 28 y/o had were just iffy such as the blushing and the skinship just felt off. I think if the age gap wasn't that big or if mc wasn't reincarnated in his 11y/o body this would've been a lot better. I did really like the plot so I'm disappointed that this just made it so I couldn't enjoy it fully